Here is some feedback that i got back from the crit today:
- I like the experiments with paint really eye catching reminds me of Alt-J, very eye catching
- love experiment with the paint, was't sure what it was at first, very visually interesting, play around with colour contrast on photoshop also like the TV drawing
- I think that the only design that reflects the song to any sort of extent is the silhouettes. Even then I think it's too plain to reflect your research, so maybe try combining it with some of your paint experiment
- The idea of the TV is cool. Experiement with high impact contrasting colours with the sketchy drawing style
- Paint experiments are nice, try combining this media with a concept, either one of your existing ones or a new one
- Siloutte works great with the bubble printing texture showing through
- TV screen is nice, match that with the experiements you have been doing with paint
- The TV and the paint experimentations are the strongest, try more versions of paint experiments, there are so many interesing blends/mixes that can be created
- I love the paint image! I also think it could fit in well with 'lorde'. I also think the city skyline idea could work well, but try out some other patterns and colours
- I like the TV colours are really nice. I think the mixed oaint looks really good but maybe too many colours, could combine the designs used pink and blue for mixed paint
- I think all these concepts are really strong and interesting! They all show a bright/ fun side
- Maybe think about the song name more? It has some pretty strong visual ideas
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