Crit

Today i had a crit on my letters, this provided some great feedback that i could use to devop my work even further. 

Here are the notes I made during the crit, they seemed to like the idea of time, and the existence of it. The group suggested different ideas such as maybe developing it into a video or using photography. I think photography would be a good idea, i would like to use it within the leaf idea maybe. I also like the idea of stars, that when you look at a star your in fact looking into the past, that could be an interesting concept to work with.